Little Cloud On Earth, poem by Drem


Just saying that I think this is pretty good considering I am writing this while half asleep. It was supposed to be a blog post about how I have no motivation or inspiration to write. And instead it turned into this.


Let me know you’re listening.

Let me know if you find this interesting.

Let me know what you think.


Little Cloud On Earth, poem by Drem

January 17th, 2016

“Been trying to be focused.

I just can’t.

No motivation

to do much.

Nothing’s beautiful anymore.

The life’s a roller rink

surrounded by stale cotton candy.

Thoughts too cloudy.

Head’s too heavy.

Heart’s too old.

Eyes want to stay shut

to the computer

which is my window

to you

and me

and the world.

I can’t see me,

you know.

You probably see more than me

than I do

and you’re

not even here.

You might

not even be real.

But I’m, nonetheless,

a faint shimmer.

Though shimmers sound pretty.

A faint shadow.

Though shadows sound romantic.

I’m a mist.

The fog you walk through

on your way home

from work

from your car

to your front door.

Not pretty. Not romantic.

A little cold.

A little cloud on Earth.”

(c) Drem 2016

11 thoughts on “Little Cloud On Earth, poem by Drem

    1. I just was sitting here. In my bed. Like too tired to copy an old one down. And like omg i can’t post. so i was going to write how i can’t post. and this came out. no editing. no re-reading. nothing. this was it. and i found a pic i thought might match. and posted.

      writing is weird sometimes.

      thank you for supporting me.

      i read it to my mom. she likes it.

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      1. she’s like “you’re this depressed and you’re in love”, meaning I’m supposed to be happy and I’m still just as pessimistic writing just as depressing shit as before. i don’t think she’s proud. but she liked the ending.

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      2. Ha. I could only imagine what mine would think with my writing. Its so much easier to write depressing shit while depressed, it doesnt mean you arent in love lol. Well, she liked it and that counts..


      3. im not even in love lol. just life, in her eyes is better than before. however, change, as we know, can cause a lot of stress and stress can lead to anxiety and that can lead to depression. so… yeah. lols

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